Thank you, I think it is much better (#7), even the letters are more readable, now. Could you please try once more - how it would look like, if the ribbon was rather asymmetric - the end to the right longer and more curled? and maybe the whole ribbon in shades of grey?
Hi, I have one more demand on you. Coul you try, please, how it would look like, if there was some kind of parchment or scroll instead of the ribbon? With the ends rolled, not curled?