My submission for your review...I'd like to know your the reasoning behind using sword to emphasize a retirement planning investment group. The word represents aggressive, conquest, war.
Scott, your comments are very insightful! And I like how you've gone outside of the box. In fact, we never even thought of a lighthouse concept, but you are right. We may want to explore this concept indeed. Thank you for submitting!
When I enter a contest I am I one man " focus Group "
1. what is the industry 2. the demographic 3. what imagery comes to mind with certain design elements in this case swords, shields etc and how they my be interpreted by potential clients 5. is the design approachable
I use this 5 step approach with each submission I upload, if I have doubts then asking questions helps resolve any confusion. If I upload a design and later decide I do not like it I will tell you and give reasons why.
Oh, I see what you mean, after you explained it ;). Still, we are pleased to add you to our top five designers because you bring a thoughtful approach to your creativity. We're looking forward to the next stage.
Looks good. Can you modify fonts on #143: Sentry Pacific is too tight together needs to be spread out more. And colored burgundy. .... or a mixture of Sentry (burgundy) and Pacific in Gold.
Financial group font doesn't complement design. Perhaps use also serif ... or a more classic sans serif font.
I've withdrawn anything that is not current or overlap it's best to keep the number of revision to a minimum as it's easier to view that scrolling through 20-30 designs
Thank you very, very much for an fantastic concept. It truly has been my favorite. Unfortunately, the majority of the team decided that other competitors are using lighthouse concepts so they prefer to go with a typographic style instead. You are a very thoughtful and talented designer.
As i said before, your design is my personal favorite and I have been trying to make a case for it with the larger team. After much going back and forth, it finally was eliminated. Again, thank you for providing such an excellent design.