Dear Jasmin, here is my submission for you #44 Font is hand drawn and uniquely created for your contest. Colors can be adjusted at any time #45 If you have any suggestion, I would be happy to hear.
Thank you so much for your submission...we'd love for you to come up with other potential options as well, if possible. We're kind of taking a turn here and realizing that what have been pushing may not be exactly what we are going for.... we want something, simple, clear, feminine, sophisticated, empowered and uplifted. You have definitely made it most of those things, but the feeling I get from it is a bit more, sassy than enlightened...think of joy, self reflection, growth, enlightenment, but also connections and support from other women. the think simple lines and feminine elegance is a great start...
I withdrew them because you asked to see some other kind of design and I thought that you are not interested for them. But I've reinstated my designs in the meantime, for you to consider them.
This is Adriann, Jasmin's partner. I haven't had a chance to leave you any comments yet so forgive me if they are different from the feedback that you've been getting so far but we need to take a new direction with the logos, one that is more in line with the look and feel of our website.
I really like these, especially #47. The reason I like them is because I feel like they are more sophisticated than most of the other logos that have been submitted. Its also very feminine.
Do you think it would be possible to try a couple more versions that are more modern? The look and feel of our site is simple, clean, modern, feminine, modern and sophisticated. I feel like this logo is very close but not quite there...
The whole idea behind "selfsavvy" is for the women in the community to get savvy about themselves which means getting smarter about our selves and learning about ourselves. I think that your logo helps to portray that which is great. Maybe you can keep building on that.
I look forward to seeing what else you come up with.
This is Adriann, Jasmin's partner. I haven't had a chance to leave you any comments yet so forgive me if they are different from the feedback that you've been getting so far but we need to take a new direction with the logos, one that is more in line with the look and feel of our website.
I really like these, especially #47. The reason I like them is because I feel like they are more sophisticated than most of the other logos that have been submitted. Its also very feminine.
Do you think it would be possible to try a couple more versions that are more modern? The look and feel of our site is simple, clean, modern, feminine, modern and sophisticated. I feel like this logo is very close but not quite there...
The whole idea behind "selfsavvy" is for the women in the community to get savvy about themselves which means getting smarter about our selves and learning about ourselves. I think that your logo helps to portray that which is great. Maybe you can keep building on that.
I look forward to seeing what else you come up with.
Hi Jasmin and Adriann, here is my new idea #96 with a more modern look. Logo represents butterfly (transition, change, freedom, hope..) Let me know your thoughts. I will submit now couple of new color variations.
Thank you so much for bearing with us. We are both really liking what you are doing with #44, but are hoping that you can make the woman a little younger feeling, maybe change her hair? We really like the lines, simple, sophisticated and peaceful feel that comes from it, but the sophistication could be interpreted borderline arrogant, and even snobby. We'd like the woman's energy to be more empowered, joyful, uplifted, growing, authentic, open etc. We love that she seems to be blooming from the petals, so maybe we can enhance that feeling of growth too? We want her to be sophisticated, but open and approachable and empowered rather than mysterious and classy. Also, we like the font used, but would love some options with the two words in different fonts. the main thing to point out is the SELF part.
Hope this helps! Thanks again for all of your great work!
I hope you are ok....we really are only waiting for your edits to make our final decision. I'm hoping you will be able to do it soon?
We are both really liking what you are doing with #44, but are hoping that you can make the woman a little younger feeling, maybe change her hair? We really like the lines, simple, sophisticated and peaceful feel that comes from it, but the sophistication could be interpreted as a bit arrogant, and even snobby. We'd like the woman's energy to be more empowered, joyful, uplifted, growing, authentic, open etc. We love that she seems to be blooming from the petals, so maybe we can enhance that feeling of growth too? We want her to be sophisticated, but also open and approachable and empowered rather than just mysterious and classy. Also, we like the font used, but would love some options with the two words in different fonts. the main thing to point out is the SELF part.
Again, we really appreciate your work and feel that there is a great chance that you will be the winner if you can integrate these ideas, so we're hoping to see what you can do! thanks again.
Hi Jasmin and Adriann, Please sorry for delay! I was working on the new design. Here it is #132 ♥ I absolutely love it! Woman is now younger, modern, full of positive energy and self-confident. I would be happy to hear your thoughts.
Thank you so much! She really has great energy, and you were able to make a whole different image, much younger and more free. We really see how much work it must have taken. So thank you.
If it is possible we'd like to integrate the two concepts, because there were a lot of things that we really liked from #44 that we'd want to keep.
In #44 we really liked the following: -simple lines -more empty space (no need for colors around her...maybe a fuzzy color around her head signifying some sort of enlightenment or something, but nothing too solid) -we really like the petals in #44 and even enhancing the concept that she is growing out of the petals
#136 We like the hip movement and the energy, but she is just a little too sexy. We like her younger hair, but not really feeling her arms up in the air. Would it be possible to use a more upright script font for the word self? This cursive is just a bit too slanted and old fashioned. We’d like the font to feel more modern.
Ultimately we really we're liking what you were going for with #44 and would like to build off of that as the foundation rather than creating a different image altogether.
ps..we really are just waiting for your updates to make the final decision, would love to perfect your submission to make sure you have the best shot at winning!
ps..we really are just waiting for your updates to make the final decision, would love to perfect your submission to make sure you have the best shot at winning!
We were wondering if we pick yours as the winner, would it be possible to get copies of all other drafts you made as well? Also, could we have #47 without the tagline?
Dear Jasmin, If you chose my design as a winner, than you will receive all variations of that design from me, saved in multiply formats .eps, .jpeg, .pdf and .png. For example, if you chose design #47 as the winner, you will receive all variations from the same design that you need #44 #45 #46 or #48 or if you chose #132 as the winner, then you will receive #134 #135 #136 as well.