Selecting Sales SuccessLogo Design Contest

creative, clean

Creative and clean but not as professional looking as I would like. Entry #2 is better than #1

I like background #2 better, can we increase the font size and change to "Finding Stars In A World Of Squares"

Dear CH,
Many thanks for your feedback, it's really helped me.
and I've updated my logo at Entry #4.
Just let me know.

Best Regards,
makinson

Entry 4 can we make the bigest star bright withiut making it look catoonish? Also, the images are so small and out of focus I can't see the work as clearly as I would like to see it.

The larger font looks better to me on 4,5,6 than the smaller fonts. Again having problems with resolution, does script look better than block font?

image 4,5,6 can we use star in the middle and squares on both sides instead of more stars.

can you make the whole sceen look more classical and simple?

Dear CH,
Many thanks for your feedback, it's really helped me.
and I've updated my logo at Entry #7 and Entry #8.
Apologize if my english is very poor, Can you give me an explanation a more detailed.
Just let me know if I have not revise logo according to your expectations, I'll revised it again.

Best Regards,
makinson

#7 is looking better, I like fewer stars and is it possible to make star on top of the world look brighter or glowing or sparkling?

Dear CH,
Many thanks for your Advice,
and I've updated my logo at Entry #9.
Please let me know.

makinson,

#11, Can you make the stars on top look like they are shining?

Dear CH,

Right now I can't give you revision because I'm out of town. One of my relative just pass away.
I'll be able to make revision tomorrow.
I'm really sorry.

Regards,
Makinson