TO ALL, The one currently in first place is VERY VERY COOL. But the one in #2 REALLY sums up what I do--Eco-Food Service Consulting and Training. The eye for detail, the green concepts, without being creepy or trite. I've been playing with each of these on potential business cards, websites, brochures. You have all done a remarkable job! A number of my colleagues will be launching their own tournaments, in large part because of YOU. Thank you, and please use the above feedback accordingly. Be advised that I like the contemporary look of the typeface in #1.
BUT, the company is SEE Solutions, LLC, "Supplee Eco-Efficient Solutions, LLC" seesolutions, or see solutions are both fine. SUPPLEE ECO-EFFICIENT SOLUTIONS, LLC, all caps is fine, or upper/lower. LLC should be SMALLER than the rest. Thanks and happy holidays!
hi - thanks for feedback, i am glad you like it. Feel free to ask any revisions
the previous comment is for all, but it is on my entries page (only you and me can read the comment) you need to post it on the Contest Discussion page
Very good move making the artwork slightly smaller. You are really listening! The LLC can be a bit smaller.
I'd like to layout my card with the same typeface you used to see if it all fits. What is this called? I would imagine that I have it. I can see why you did the artwork in the square. It looks a little creepy without it. Nice job! I like them all, including #128, which doesn't have the hyphen Eco-Efficient, or LLC, but the leaf with the eye is very compelling. Can it go a little larger? Thanks!
Nice job. I've moved it to first. I like this because it tells my story better than the square, but the square for some reason looks better. Can this "leaf" look more "leafy?" Example, pinch the ends a bit more? The colors are just beautiful. Thanks for your efforts!
A comment from a business associate mentioned water. Wonder if the eye (pupil) might look interesting as a water drop? Or, instead of a leaf, put the eye in a outline of a water drop? Just a thought. I think in invited too many people to this dance. Thanks!