Good evening! I am an assistant to the contest holder and co judge of the competition. I met dk as a client at Seaside Chiropractic and am voicing my opinion as both a client and assistant.
I don't really like the color scheme in #4 at all. I feel like the design is too busy at first glance.
I like what you've done in #14 with the spine and your alterations to the color scheme in these updates, although I am not a fan of the cursive "Seaside" in the majority of your entries. The blues and yellows work very well together in your design for #13, but the overall design is just a little too plain.
I would really like to see what the text style for #13 would look like with the gradient style look of #12 or the spine and beach design of #14. Perhaps an example of what the printed words would look like stacked and altered in size?
Thanks for your time ~Lauren, assistant to dk, contest co-judge.
hi! here's some updates..hope it works..thanks a lot for all the feedback..just tell me any feedback about the fonts or anything to changed..thanks again..
Hello, Lauren here again! Thank you so much for your prompt resubmissions! I like the text style in entries #19 - #22 the best out of all of them. The block letters just don't seem as professional enough for the type of page we are trying to create. I would like to see #20 and #19 varied, could you place the circle with the spine to the left of the text? Something akin to the logo found on this website: http://sitetuners.com . I still like the gradient shading behind the text, but you can vary it to fit the design. Also, if you have any other ideas that are completely different from the variations you've presented here, I would really like to see those as well. The contest is still wide open and I would love to see diversity among your submissions. Thanks again! ~Lauren
I think that #20 has a lot of potential. I agree with Lauren that I'd like to see the spine to the left of the text, but I have a bit of a problem with the graphic itself. In the human body, the largest vertebrae are at the bottom of the spine, not the top. Could you maybe reverse the graphic to reflect this?
Hi! just read your feedback, I'll work and try my best to come up what you want..many thanks for the feedback it helps a lot..I'll submit my revision after making them..