Can you also please adjust the spacing between the animals as well? Eg. The crab is too close to the shrimp's whisker.
We need to think about its application and legibility when it needs to be a smaller size.
Great use of the fish silhouette and all the sea animals that make it up. Please use this one going forward.
We would like to see the 'FESTIVAL' typography that you presented in the other one with this fish. The letter tracking in this one is too spaced out.
Can we please see a version where the Type is one colour and the animals as one other colour? We feel that using 2 colour swatches might increase contrast and legibility.
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Thank you for being patient - we just needed to confer with our colleagues.
Can we please see a version where the 'Sea Food and Eat It' is a dark/navy blue?
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There needs to be more contrast between the the title and the word 'Festival' in terms of shade.
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Can we please see a version where Festival is the same orange please?
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Thank you for the feedback.
I'll update the new concepts an upload them shortly.
Kind regards.
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We need to think about its application and legibility when it needs to be a smaller size.
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We would like to see the 'FESTIVAL' typography that you presented in the other one with this fish. The letter tracking in this one is too spaced out.
Can we please see a version where the Type is one colour and the animals as one other colour? We feel that using 2 colour swatches might increase contrast and legibility.