Sea Food & Eat It FestivalLogo Design Contest

Hi defevliz
yes we can HELP you to make all revision that your request.
but
we're on 'Selection Phase' only 1st place can make revision.

the solution is
if you want me to make revision you can adjust my rank to 1st place (temporary) then I will upload the revision.

and If you don't like it, you can bring back my rank again.


B 1st Rgd, mbahdjoyo

Hi mbahdjoyo,

This is looking great.
Can you tighten up the festival and year bar?
We think they need to be straighter rather than slanted.
Also please get rid of the seaweed jumping out from 'Festival'.

Hi again please take a look my new revision on entry #90

more clean, simple and bold
change the color, shrimp and wine
any suggestion for this entry?


B 1st rgd, mbahdjoyo

more clean, simple and bold
change the color, shrimp and wine
any suggestion for this entry?


B 1st rgd, mbahdjoyo

Hi again please take a look my new revision on entry #89

revision
change the font and more ocean look color
what do you thing?
any other suggestion?

B 1st rgd, mbahdjoyo

please check my revision on entry #78

Can you please change the typography for both title and Festival?

We think that Impact font is too outdated nowadays and the Festival font is too formal for the type of event.

on the light background

thanks for your feedback.
please check my revision on entry #56

Hi mbahdjoyo,

With the white outline we're not sure how it will translate on a white/light background. Can you show us a version where it sits on that?

revision
more slick and stylish
and modify the shrimp into a minimalistic.
what do you thing?

any other suggestion?


B 1st rgd, mbahdjoyo

thanks for your feedback.
please take a look my revision on entry #44

Hello mbahdjoyo,

The logo looks great as a work of design, however it is not the image we are looking for. This style has the appeal for children, and it reminds us of a children's play-centre rather than a festival. The thick black lines, drop shadow, playful typography and boisterous composition are indicative of this audience.

We are looking for something more slick and stylish rather than youthful. To achieve our vision, try subtracting the stars and wine bottles, tighten up the type and modify the shrimp into a minimalistic design.

I hope this helps in our vision going forward.

Hi defevliz
any feedback for my entry?
just let me know if you have any suggestion and I will HELP you to make revision,

b 1st rgd, mbahdjoyo