Really nice creative font, and we like the colours that you're using.
The main problem we have with it is that it is too hard to read, especially when viewed in a small size. The "Dripping good!" is easy to read, even though it is many times smaller. So we feel it might not work well on business cards and other small format media.
Also, a couple of people here were reminded of doughnuts by the font. While the font doesn't need to say "pancakes", we don't want it to say something else.
We'd be interested in seeing any more ideas you may have,
That looks really delicious! Thank you for your entry. At this point we are not looking for any obvious pancake visuals since we will be adding a bigger menu to our trailer kitchen in the next few months. However, if we were this certainly would be a wonderful logo to consider!!