The background shape is interesting. But because the shape and the outline of the letters are both the same brown, the letters feel like they are being suffocated a little. Any way to make just a brown outline around the letters? Would it be possible to give the letters a colour as well? Something warm, like a yellow, orange, red or even a purple but a of a bluer shade.
Yes! I like #29 the best out of the 3! But something still seems to be missing. I don't quite know what sorry. I will have to think about this. Thank you for that upgrade!!
Thanks for all those updates. That does look better. I'm sorry, I am not sure what it is. Perhaps because the green and purple don't feel like food colours. I am also thinking that on business cards it might look funny having a cloudy background like that.
Hi again! Things we like in #48 are the excellent font and the colours that you're using. The swirls above and below aren't really working for us, but we know there needs to be something else besides the word Scrumptious. Ideally, we'd like to see a design element that is subtle and feels sophisticated, linking to our theme of a mad tea party. (The hats in #30 and #31 are too obvious for us)
I'll do my best to think of something before the contest ends, right now I'm definitely unable to as its 5am and I havent slept! But I will think hard on this and try and come up with something you love :)