Scruffy To Fluffy Pet SpaLogo Design Contest

banner style and change the face expression.
any other suggestion?

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please check my revision on entry #167

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We're now thinking of a more long, banner style logo like the first few selected instead of round. Also, could the dog be less scruffy looking and have a closed mouth or a partially open, little smile look instead

revision
change the dog to Australian Shepherd
what do you thing?
am I in right direction?

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thanks for your feedback,
i made some revision on entry #86
please check it out.

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It's cute! You can take away the est. 2023 and the website link at the bottom. Could you maybe try using a different dog? We were thinking more of a Australian Shepherd type dog (example in link below) or a unique scruffy type dog

https://www.google.com/search?q=australian%20shepherd%20logo&tbm=isch&ved=2ahUKEwiVq_CC4vyAAxWXP1kFHfSTAZYQ2-cCegQIABAD&oq=Australian%20shelogo&gs_lcp=ChJtb2JpbGUtZ3dzLXdpei1pbWcQARgAMgYIABAHEB4yCAgAEAUQBxAeMggIABAIEAcQHjIICAAQCBAHEB4yCAgAEAgQBxAeOgQIIxAnOgcIABCKBRBDOgUIABCABDoHCCMQsAIQJzoHCAAQDRCABDoKCAAQigUQsQMQQ1CGEFj4R2DZWGgAcAB4AoABmAGIAegVkgEEMS4yMpgBAKABAcABAQ&sclient=mobile-gws-wiz-img&ei=jDfrZJW1IJf_5NoP9KeGsAk&bih=750&biw=412&client=ms-android-verizon-us-rvc3&shem=canimgc&source=sh%2Fx%2Fim%2Fcan%2F2#imgrc=6BJ-mPUVlez3cM

Hi peacedog7
any feedback for my entry?
just let me know if you have any suggestion and I will HELP you to make revision.

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