Thank you for your entry. I like your interpretation of our original concept, but the lighter blue swirl in conjunction with the "O" really reminds me (?) of an Egyptian eye. Though I feel the directionality of the inner light blue swirl is correct (coming from the bottom left), could you flip it so it comes from the bottom right?
Also, the drs. would like the smaller type "effectiveness...etc...." to be on two lines, since the sentence is so long the font has to be very small for it to fit all on one line.