I love the shading and highlights of the drop in #106. Is there anyway to create that same appearance in this drop? Perhaps that's the way you already made this one, but it may be harder to see because it's such a light color. I don't want to lose the brightness of the yellow in this drop, but I'd love to see more noticeable highlights and shading like in #106.
Just an idea, it may not work, but can you try to add a subtle touch of the deep cobalt blue (like in #104) to the very bottom edge of all of the lettering?
I would like the font to match what is used in the full logo, but i'm having trouble deciding whether I should go with the water ripple, the shadow, or nothing under the S. I can imagine various scenarios where they would all be very useful.
I've been looking at the leaves more closely,. Can do something in between these and #194?
If these leaves could be curved a bit, but not a much as #194, and some shading added, but toned down a bit compared to #194, I think it would be a good balance.
I like this, but I'm not sure I like it better than #120. Thank you for trying!
I really like the shading of the leaves, but hey look bigger now. Can they be made the same size as in #120?
Wow! That looks very cool! I think it may obscure the logo a bit, though. Rather than a reflection, can you create a very subtle offset shadow for the lettering?
I LOVE the tree in #177, but I still think this one is my favourite.
A couple of hinge to try with this one:
1. Can the leaves be enhanced a bit to give them more dimension?
2. Can there be a very thin and suble outline or shadow applied the entire logo to make it feel like it's backlit or floating off the page?
Like this but bring the ripples a bit lower to come underneath the word Nature, then disappear into Nature at the end of the word where the ripple would curve back.
Can you try this with #108? I really like the way that one looks!
This is my favorite design so far. I would like to play with a few things yet, just to see what else it can look like. If you'd rather wait until the finalists round to make further changes,that's just fine. You've done so much work already.
Anyway, here's what I'm thinking:
I haven't decided on the color of the drop. I really like the gold, but I also really like the colors in #78. If I go with the gold, I would like to see if it can be made brighter and more shiny looking.
That looks nice. So many subtle changes make such a difference in how it looks. I need time to take in all the differences and think about what I like best. Thank you for all your time and attention!
Could you lighten up the drop? Maybe have the bright area blend out into a lighter and brighter green and blue. Keep the very deep blue further toward the bottom edge.
I keep coming back to this one. You're making this tough! That's a good thing, though. :)
Any way to enhance the drop to make it stand out more, or look brighter? Maybe add more blue to the bottom and a touch of yellow or a brighter yellow green to the highlighted area at the top of the drop?
What about giving the whole thing a more high definition appearance?
It may be a bit much, but would a rainbow gradient work for the drop? Starting with a hint of red at the very tip, to gold then bright yellow near the highlight, and proceed down to green and dark blue or violet
at the bottom.
Yes!!!
Let me sit with that one for now. Still a few days to see what comes in, but I'll let you know if I think of (or see) anything else I would like.
This is beautiful! I honestly don't know if I like the green oil drop or the gold one better, now that you've added the gradient.
I'd still like to see this without the extra wording of the slogan underneath.
I love the placement of the leaves and oil drop in this one, and I really like the clouring of the oil drop.
I'm not sure about the brown lettering, though. I would like to see if it works as a deep cobalt or ultramarine blue instead of brown.
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I really like the way the leaf and drop are incorporated into the design! I really like the colour, but would like to see if more colour could be incorporated.
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this without any changes..
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need to resubmit?
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If these leaves could be curved a bit, but not a much as #194, and some shading added, but toned down a bit compared to #194, I think it would be a good balance.
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I really like the shading of the leaves, but hey look bigger now. Can they be made the same size as in #120?
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A couple of hinge to try with this one:
1. Can the leaves be enhanced a bit to give them more dimension?
2. Can there be a very thin and suble outline or shadow applied the entire logo to make it feel like it's backlit or floating off the page?
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No, wait, maybe #119 is!
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Sorry, what I meant was to invert #119.
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bottom lighter ..
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I need to stare at them for a while and think about it. Thank you! Such beautiful work!
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Can you try this with #108? I really like the way that one looks!
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Anyway, here's what I'm thinking:
I haven't decided on the color of the drop. I really like the gold, but I also really like the colors in #78. If I go with the gold, I would like to see if it can be made brighter and more shiny looking.
I'd also like to see what the dark blue lettering looks like as dark turquoise. Kind of like this:
https://www.google.ca/search?q=deep+bright+turquoise&client=safari&hl=en-ca&prmd=ivsn&source=lnms&tbm=isch&sa=X&ved=0ahUKEwi7gbSx983OAhVLJh4KHUBDAK4Q_AUIBygB&biw=375&bih=559&dpr=2#hl=en-ca&tbm=isch&q=dark+turquoise+thread&imgrc=JHXWI3m_YBrq8M%3A
I really love the gradient of the green letters in #78 and would like the same for this one.
I would also like to see some different font options for SCENT (maybe even the whole word). Something softer with more flow would be nice.
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rings?
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And can the font of SCENT be made a tiny bit thinner?
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sorry for late response i just back to my computer..How about #72?is that you mean like this?
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Any way to enhance the drop to make it stand out more, or look brighter? Maybe add more blue to the bottom and a touch of yellow or a brighter yellow green to the highlighted area at the top of the drop?
What about giving the whole thing a more high definition appearance?
It may be a bit much, but would a rainbow gradient work for the drop? Starting with a hint of red at the very tip, to gold then bright yellow near the highlight, and proceed down to green and dark blue or violet
at the bottom.
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Is it possible to slightly increase the colour gradient of the green lettering to be a bit deeper at the bottom of the letters?
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How about #47?
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Let me sit with that one for now. Still a few days to see what comes in, but I'll let you know if I think of (or see) anything else I would like.
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I'd still like to see this without the extra wording of the slogan underneath.
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And I'd like to see it without the slogan underneath. I think all the wording makes it a bit too busy..
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I'm not sure about the brown lettering, though. I would like to see if it works as a deep cobalt or ultramarine blue instead of brown.
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Thank you so much for your feedback..
I'll try yo improve the design..
and if you need others please feel free and don't hesitate for ask me..
Thank you
Best Regards
Amanterkendali
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