Would like to see a version of this without bubbles in the word Tonic, and also trying some different fonts for Scale, considering I'll probably want to use that font more widely on the site. Something simple. Also, make the word scale grey instead of black. And then an alternate version where there are bubbles, but they go up from the word tonic so they bubble into scale. Small enough bubbles I guess so it's not cluttered. Or the other option would be to have semi-transparent bubbles. Thanks!
I think this is my favorite so far. Would like to see a version all in dark grey, and also a version with no bubbles in the letters Scale Tonic - I think this will be good to use in situations where the font has to be small.
Hey! I'd like to see this with the wave removed, and three iterations. 1) Scale and Tonic both in teal, 2) Scale in white with teal border, Tonic in teal, 3) Scale in teal, Tonic in white with teal border. By border I mean the letter itself would have a teal border, but white fill. The bubbles can match the letters. Hope this makes sense!
Good morning!
Here is the new one #164. I adjusted the original flow line and the S is less obscured in this iteration. #165 is the reverse, teal on top with scale. white on bottom with tonic. #166 is the reversed icon
I think the swoop of the wave on the letters looked better in the first version of this, if that could be reinstated but just w the S slightly less obscured? I also liked the placement of the original bubbles better for some reason (if the sparkles were replaced with small bubbles) - I think it's fine if the bubbles extend beyond the C! I would also appreciate seeing a version of this with the colors reversed on both the letters and bottle - teal on top for both. I think when the top if the bottle is teal it looks 'open' whereas here it looks 'closed'. Thanks!
Here is a revised version.
The bottle is shorter, but the neck extends a bit above the letters to balance the design better. The top of the bottle aligns with the top bottle. #162 shows the ST inside the bottle.
This is so cute! A few things I'd like to see: it's it possible to switch the colors in the bottle so they align with the letters? So, white on top, teal on bottom. Also, I think the wave obscures the S in scale just slightly too much, if that can be adjusted. I'm also interested in setting a version without the 'sparkles' - maybe with a few extra bubbles instead. Cuz now with the bottles, I wonder if the sparkles make it too busy. And as far as using the bottle - is it possible to make a version of the bottle that contains the S and T? Maybe keeping the bubbles if they fit. Thanks!
I love it! I added the tagline too, but you can use it without if you choose. The tonic bottle can be used separately and opens an array of fun marketing ideas.
Let me know if you want to see any more changes. I have family fun night with my kids tonight, but I can get some work done tonight after they go to bed.
I'm not so excited about this font, but I love the bottle icon! Is it possible to try to work this into your original teal logo? My thought is, have the bottle on the left. Then the word Scale can be white on a teal background with white bubbles. And Tonic can be teal on a white background with white bubbles. With a wavy line between, so it corresponds with the line on the bottle icon. Let me know if that makes sense!
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Here are the updates #170 #171 and #172
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Let me know if you want to see anything else. I'll be on and off throughout the day.
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Here is the new one #164. I adjusted the original flow line and the S is less obscured in this iteration.
#165 is the reverse, teal on top with scale. white on bottom with tonic.
#166 is the reversed icon
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The bottle is shorter, but the neck extends a bit above the letters to balance the design better. The top of the bottle aligns with the top bottle.
#162 shows the ST inside the bottle.
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Let me know if you want to see any more changes. I have family fun night with my kids tonight, but I can get some work done tonight after they go to bed.
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I'll work on it and get it uploaded for you.
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Here is a version with Scale in gray.
I also uploaded 2 possible variations on an ST icon #147 & #148
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