Thank you for the feedback and considering my design! Here are my updates - #28, #29, #30, #31. Any modifications in mind please do not hesitate to let me know.
Thank you for the additional entries. I like incorporating the barre.. I like 72. Could you make the slogan font just a little darker - so it's a little easier to see. thanks!
By the way, the design works well in single color #99, #100, #101 which is very important for future printing purposes such as fax, embroidery, and other merchandise.
thank you for the additional options!! For #112, could you make the font for "Barre Studio" and the slogan darker or bolder? I like the grey color, just want it to stand out a little more. thank you