going away from where it was working....use the same S then build everything else like that....keep it clean and compact it should all feel very strong and fluid for a logo
The idea of this S is very cool...everything else should match the vibe of the S though .....the A def works best capitalized with this style but this AVI do not feel fluid with this S....try matching the rest of the letters to the vibe
this also has potential...lose the top swoop above the S so it reads more as an S, mirror the picks over the S so both have the same handle & tail, lose the tail on the right side of the i & shorten the i a bit as well...lets see how that looks cleaned up a bit
This has a lot of potential.....could you try making the S more readable as an S though...one thing I definitely need about the logo is that it is clear that is says SAVI to anyone looking at it
Hi, this was done with a brush pen on paper then il illustrator after the scan. It's my forst proposal and I will be back soon with others. In the meantime, let me know if you like the direction.
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