It's better but still a long way. Try shadows in center instead of the actual gable....like you had on the first one. Make it more graphic and simple. Try putting text on side instead of under. Use saturn luxury homes or saturn design+build
I think we are moving in the wrong direction. Start from this again. I like the fact that inside the ring is simple building shadows. But it must show homes and not skyscrapers. Stop using a gable to show homes...there must be a better motif for luxury homes
If you can incorporate more of a residential house that would be preferred, we like the fact that the building is light and abstract. Please also use the name Saturn Design Build
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Must more convey luxury home not city
Must be original art
Should read "saturn design build"
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