12 & 13: Appreciate you incorporating my slogan but overall the design looks too halloweeny. The colors, the birds' silhouette. Like the saguaros but don't understand the item on the left. The roof top on the bottom is abstract so is difficult to identify. Might be better to remove the bottom portion of circle altogether - or would that look too much like pac man?
Nice job with #18! Love how you incorporated the state flag and still captured my requested elements. Can the colors be bolder? I'm afraid the gold will not show up well in print. Also can you change the window by replacing the "cross" with 3 small circles in a triangle? Also, not sure about the font for "SATO." Can I see some other styles you might recommend? Thank you!
Also, could you revise the saguaros so that the trunk is the thickest part and the arms are different lengths and closer to the trunk? See #31 for idea (except no 3rd nub on top).
Can't decide which font I like better, 56, 80 or 81. I'm leaning toward a more vertical design - how does it look to move the state image above the text as in your #57? Also, my team is not getting the 3 dots. Any ideas on how to make the roofline more visible without being glaringly obvious?
I think the font in #56 works best for a vertical layout because it is a bit wider. Are you saying the 3 dots are not prominent enough or you want to get rid of them all together? I will re-work based on your feedback. In the meantime #93 is what the vertical layout looks like.
Can you proportion #93 similar to 64? Need to remove the 3 dots altogether. Nobody understands that architectural element. Need your help to delineate the rooftop. Perhaps a small vent in lieu of circles?
Thanks for your patience, but I think I like 99 without the chimney. Also, could you change the "window" in 56 similar to 99? This one is also still in the running.
I'm wondering if the font for SATO is a little too bold, too masculine. Can you make it smaller while keeping Real Estate Group legible? Perhaps add serifs? Welcome your ideas.
how about #159? I think this font is very balanced and elegant. I also added a slight shine to the graphic. Let me know if there is anything else I can do to get back in first place.
#80 with the window as in your #122. I really like this design and it's really tied with the first place design. The only reason it is not in first place is because some people don't get that it's the state of Arizona. Nothing you can do about that!
The middle trunk of the saguaros need to be taller, not wider. Can you do that in 182? And though I like this new color scheme, can you make it brighter somehow? Thanks for your patience.