Love your sense of typography! (Would love to see what you could do with sans as well.) Some other input: May be a bit too much. Simplify it, maybe? More subtle? And try some other colors on, too. Go for it! Thanks so much for entering. Hope to see more. : ) ~Geoff
#36 -- Hi, IB. I'm a Creative Director, so it's impossible for me not to be inspired by work and want to offer little tweaks and suggestions. Here are some thoughts -- because I see potential. Please take them for what they're worth... - The top flourish/serif on the N in Bank is begging to extend up and out to form a hill contour -- and the hill contour you have there is begging to be altered to connect to that N. Can you see it? Engage them. Let's see what happens. The blue lines (representing water) may not even be necessary at that point. Give it a look/try? Please and thanks so much for indulging my 'what if?' thinking. Hopefully you're finding it as constructive and collaborate as it truly is. ~G
It's my pleasure to indulge your what if's. You have good ideas. They are proving invaluable, not only for your designs, but the way I am starting to think for all designs. It is helping me think in new ways. Much appreciated, Thank You.