Hi Sand10 it would be great if you ask me for any improvement to my entries anything you want me to do change typography or colors please let me know, thanks :)
the font is fine ...not sure i like #16 with the white bottom ... most entries so far are green - we will be working in the caribbean and along the east coast, so maybe incorporating water in the design, which could lend itself to shades of blue (don't use michigan wolverine blue - thats not gonna work at all) ... we have another company whose logo is based on ohio states athletic logo, so we do favor things like that
Thanks for the feedback bcscompany i will tryout shades of blue i think you are more confortable with horizontal than vertical composition, probaly more colorful caribbean concept, thanks again.