Good start! Here are some comments 1. The man and hat look more like a cowboy than a patriot. 2. The placement of the star over the word Patriots is making the P look like an R -- not sure if the star reads as an "A", but we do like the drama it creates.
Entry 13 I love the hat design. Can we turn the Patriot to be face forward instead of quarter turned or profile? Also, can we give him a more powerful or focused facial look? On "Patriots", can you create a script using "Jenna Sue" font?
I love the change in the face. Entry 16 has my favorite hat look, but a red accent around the top would be awesome. Can you change the position of the left eye or use less detail on it? This forward facing look communicates what I want. Can you enlarge the flag in the background and use the color scheme from entry 16 with the font style of 18 or 17 (blue font w/ red or white accent)? Thank you....this is awesome!
Entry 19 I love the flag size on that one. Can you combine the font style of entry 20 (SJCA on top of the crossed "t" in Patriots") with the flag size of entry 19 and bring the flag up in the background just a little bit? Also, I am an idiot....i meant to say right eye instead of left. I liked the left eye look in entries 14 thru 18. We are looking for less detail in the eyes while still communicating the serious look. One last thing, can you change the mouth line to straight across instead of a slightly frowned look? Thanks. I appreciate your quick response to all our changes.