Sam's Bar KnicksvahLogo Design Contest

Yours stand out!!! Is there any way to make the wording flatter and non not such an angle so the words are more easily read? Especially the word SAM" BAR those are the ones tthat are hard to read. Thanks

Can you put SAM'S. On the top line and BAR KNICKSVAH on the second line so his name stands out. Would less black shading under KNICKSVAH make it easier to read?

sory for a late response, because i'm on long trip

I'll change my works

ASAP

Like this #52 #53 #54 #55 ?

Please take off the italics in Sam's name and it is hard to read Sam's name with the shading the font needs to be changed to the font on entry 37

Ok

i'll change my works

:)

Like this #57 ?