Looks better. Can you make the lime slice a bit smaller so you see more sunset and it is more in line with an actual lemon slice size? It looks to be about the size of the entire glass here.
can you shorten the stem just a bit more so that the base is a bit higher and then move the D in Salted and the C in Cowboy closer together (even on top of the base if need be)\
I am so sorry to be such a pain but will you try to make the hat bigger and then hide the base of the glass (again...sorry) but make it look so the stem is not coming out of the middle of the hat?? Maybe that's what's going on...
I am struggling with the stem of that margarita glass. Am I overanalyzing it or can you send some other options? Maybe make the cowboy hat larger and tilt it more so it goes up into the drink stem/area between the words more? Do you have any suggestions?
Yes, this is about there. Can you do me a favor and tile the hat just a bit more down toward the word Life (you may have to move the hat to the right some to accomplish that) and change the band around to hat to darker brown?
Hi there, can you look at the contest brief and see the shape of the hat the client is looking for? They like the color of this hat but want it to be shaped at I have just uploaded. Can you also more the stem of the margarita glass over some so it doesn't look like it's coming straight out of the hat? I am ready to pick a winner but need you to do this ASAP please...
OK, can you think of anywhere to this design you can add the cowboy hat with some salt on the brim possibly also having the salt drip into the margarita glass rim? I know it's a lot but we love this design only wish we could have the hat in there somewhere.
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1. Separate the salted and cowboy text and put the margarita between it.
And Make it bigger
2. Change the banner color to white or cream color.
Let me clear the direction.
1. Separate the salted and cowboy text and put the margarita between it.
And Make it bigger
2. Change the banner color to white or cream color.
Am I right?
There something I can get it about "not the glass?? " Word, can you help me to make it more clear direction?
I really love this. Salted Cowboy is a bit hard to read. Maybe move the letters apart, make the banner bigger and put a margaritas between the words and not the glass?? Maybe even make the banner behind salted cowboy white or cream color? Play with it, I trust you will come up with something
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make the lime slice smaller
any other suggestion?
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rotate the hat a little bit more and have the front of it dip down a bit and between the word life and the word on
any other suggestion?
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moving the hat bigger and a little more to the right
what do you thing?
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please check on entry #106
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little bit white accent on the stem of margarita glass
give shadow to give dimension between hat and margarita.
what do you thing?
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separate between glass and hat.
any other suggestion?
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you can check 2 version color of hat on entry #100 and #101
please check it out
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any other suggestion?
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please check it out.
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make the salt falling on the brim on the hat
any other suggestion?
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please take a look.
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more bold and easy to read.
what do you thing?
any other suggestion?
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I made some revision on entry #85
please check it out.
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make the Margarita glass taller so it looks like it the sunset is dipping into the glass
any other suggestion?
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you can check your request on entry #78
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1. Separate the salted and cowboy text and put the margarita between it.
And Make it bigger
2. Change the banner color to white or cream color.
am I in right direction?
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1. Separate the salted and cowboy text and put the margarita between it.
And Make it bigger
2. Change the banner color to white or cream color.
Am I right?
There something I can get it about "not the glass?? " Word, can you help me to make it more clear direction?
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remove the cowboy and give a beach feel.
what do you thing?
any other suggestion?
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you can check my revision on entry #61
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if you want still want me to make revision you can rise up my rank.
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any feedback for my entry?
just let me know if you have any suggestion and I will HELP you to make revision.
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