ok on # 322 i just lowered the "private food design" line... 323 and 324 are options to integrate that line a little more.. but also looses a bit of its clean effortless look...
You are receiving good feedback. The only concern and I think the reason why you havn't won is that there is a concern that it is a little simple, somethign that could be done on any computer. Is tehre anythign you can do to make it slightly more dynamic.