#9: Please place the emblem in line with the text - before, middle, and/or after. Is there some way to work the emblem into one of the letters? Please make the color used for 'systems' the same as the blue in the emblem. Please try different numbers (fewer) and arrangements of the small circles.
#10: Seems overly masculine. Please soften. Also, try a color with less green.
#12: Please try softening the profile.