Sagebrush Hills Film FestivalLogo Design Contest

What about this? Thanks

This is definitely a huge step in the right direction. I will be honest that it's still not grabbing me but it's top 3. I'd like to continue working on this. I don't like the black. but the depth does so much! maybe a different color combo? the film scripts a little tighter? I'm not sure how to articulate my thoughts, sorry.

How about something like this to add depth.
If you have any ideas let me know.

Regards
Peter

This logo is great in its simplicity. is there anything else you could add or tweak to give a bit more "grab" or flare? it seems as though it's missing something.

Here is this one in a brown version.

Here it is as a sagebrush , sorry the other one did look like a tree.

I like this overall design. Looks like a tree rather than sagebrush, though.

I like the clean lines and simplicity of this one.

Not a fan of the blue/brown color combo.

Hi

Please see my three designs. If you would like any changes just let me know.

Regards
Peter