Great start! We quite like both #17 and #18 and would like to see some more fonts. Make the colors slightly more vibrant. Try the squares to be more smooth edged and rounded corners with a 3d effect.
Hi Neil, thanks for the feedback ...... I made the changes ,however the rounded egdes aren't too visible at that scale.......could make it bigger if you like. Let me know if you would like to see other changes as well.. rgds crafty