Hi Getek, we love the concept in fact this is the first original artistic logo that has been presented. I have ranked as second presently as the leaves reflect an Environmental business and although it is a component it is not the major focus, Major focus is Safety and Health, and what we want to communicate through the logo is connectivity engagement ie people thinking together for sustainable solutions. I am hoping that you will be able to modify to change the leaves to something that represents thoughts, this could be represented in coloured dots to represent thinking and an element of integration such as half circle and perhaps an alternate or abstract steps under the logo. Could you also provide an example of this with the TACT increased in font size, the emphasis in the logo should be on TACT, ie make the T of the person larger.
The colours representing the thinking (thoughts) should be represented in bright colours, it could include green but should not be dominant.
I hope this makes sense and look forward to some new submissions. Thanks Monique
Hi I have looked at some of your other designs and have some more comments for you.
Triumph: Look at reversing the lines into the person represented in the T of TACT and at each line present a coloured dot to represent thinking into the person. The use of the colours is great in this Logo.
PopUp PMO: You could use the concept of people connecting somehow to replace the leaves the people could be represented in bright colours.
IAM: the use of people changed to represent thinking remove the world or perhaps look at change to a people link or arc that moves into the T for Tact.
I look forward to seeing something from you, Monique
Getek, I really need to see some further options please refer to the notes above as I cannot leave you ranked in the leading position as it reflects the Environment as the focus.
Thanks Getek, love the new submissions, could you do one other for me incorporating the new 'leg on entry #73 into a version of #80 can the leg be orange or blue just to bring the colours and the design together. I will send this onto my marketing person as well as like the representation of the text in black and gray and let her make the final decision on that. Thanks again.
Hi Getek, unfortunately the marketing group do not like the amended version for the company. They preferred the leaves format however this does not work for me because of the environmental focus. Do you have any other artistic ideas for graphic instead of leaves? Im not sure what to suggest but it may be worth tryijg leaving the putside alignment of leaves and inside using small dots and lines respresenting people or just trying it with the same abstract shape as the leaves but with abstract dots with the line showing many faces and perhaps just in cool colours rather than totally bright as marketings response is this looks great but not serious or masculine.
I really appreciate your help with this as I still prefer the concept. Thanks Monique
I have modified the entry to see if you are able to incorporate an arc or circle from the small blue leg down and then flowing around the wording somehow to represent connectivity. I apologise but we are tied between two submissions and although I like the concept it feels incomplete, so this will be a final attempt and then we can nominate which design will be the winner.
Thanks so much, and I look forward to this update, Monique
I have try to incorporate an arc or circle from the small blue leg down and then flowing around the wording but it is make logo busy, not good to look.
Hi, marketing have requested a couple of colour changes for comparison. They prefer the logo written in previous colour font, HSEC Mindset in grey and then the next step in blue.
Secondly they would like a comparison in colour as presented in a previous design:
SafeTACT colours with Safe and the leg in orange. Slogan: HSEC Mindset (write down in grey), the next step (in orange) Marketing thinks that orange gives more life to the logo. It represents creativity! It is vibrant and give us more options of bright colours to be used in the website.