Safe FootballLogo Design Contest

Hi Sir! If you need any changes or anything else, feel free to ask, will do that for you.

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Hi Sir! Thanks for the feedback..missed that..will update the revision sooner.

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Thank you, looks great. Can you try to add in the lightening bolt image I linked on Dropbox?

Hi Sir! Thanks for the feedback , I have update the revision based on your feedback, Hope you like it. feel free to ask if you need any changes.

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we really love this. can you make the outline thinner and try making the colors like this logo design linked below? https://www.dropbox.com/s/f69o4vxw9wo8ru9/attachment_27266231.jpeg?dl=0

Hi Sir! I Simple and memorable icon - which can be use for all branding works.

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Hi Sir! Thanks for the feedback..will submit the changes sooner.

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can you add depth to the shield?

Hi Sir! Will work on the football part and submit it sooner.

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I like these! the football looks like a corn cobb, so had to can it, but the design is cool

Hi Sir! I have update some new revision as more masculine and serious ..hope you like it..your feedback will help me to serve you my best.

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Hi Sir! No problem...will make it more masculine with the correct texture and look and submit it sooner.

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thanks, but it again looks to much like a cartoon. Sorry, I appreciate your efforts and want to reward you if we can. You have done a lot of work and you are very talented. Does my request and objectives make sense?

We don't Like the Blue football or the yellow. it looks too much like a cartoon. the top ranked logo right now has the right look, but your logos could be be much better if it had the right color and texture

Hi Sir! I have update the revision based on your recent feedback...and about similarities to European soccer club..will make it more to look as american football and submit it sooner.

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based on the feedback we have received, people think this shield is too similar to a european soccer/football team logo. We like it, but would like something more unique.

Hi Sir! Thanks for the feedback...just get back...will work on it and submit it sooner.

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I think our team wants to explore developing this design. Can you review this file with graphics? For background, "Tip of the Spear" is one of the Safe Football Programs, and we think it would be good to make these two logos look related/similar for branding purposes. The shields represent different levels of skill (similar to a martial arts ranking or "belt" system). Could you refine the football to fit the style? Doesn't have to be the same as Tip of the Spear, but more edgy than the blue ball in the middle. Also, add in a shield outline behind the logo? thank you. We appreciate your work. Your logos are the best for what we are looking for in this contest, but we need to refine so we can walk away with the right design. Thank you for bearing with us and for your work. https://www.dropbox.com/s/6eff337vtey1fd4/TOS%20Ranks.pdf?dl=0

Hi Sir! I am working on the bridge, font and everything to match together..will submit later final revisions .

Hi Sir! Thanks for the feedback...will work on it and submit it later today as its 5 am now here :) will submit new concept sooner with your suggestions.

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this also has potential. i think we need to get the right font, colors and football and it could work

I don't like the bridge and the font is overused. we like the shape and lines of the logo. looking forward to next revisions, thank you very much

Hi Sir! I have submit some new revision based on your feedback. i am working on new concept too. will submit it too sooner. feel free to ask if you need any changes.

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Hi Sir! Thanks for the feedback..working on it..with submit 2-3 different design based on your ideas sooner.

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last idea... (for now). if there is a SUBTLE way to incorporate "sacred geometry" within our logo or a Ying Yang Symbol it would be worth trying. the subtle symbolism has meaning for our company: "perfection & balance"
Again, if this doesn't work conceptually its not a deal barker, thank you for your work, can't wait to see the revisions!

here is my poor attempt to show an idea... sorry for butchering your work, and I'm not asking you to do this exact design, but hopefully it inspires an idea. its hard to tell, but i included the "leverage" symbols from our business card design which is in the pdf we attached for the contest https://www.dropbox.com/s/nsjcgzt1wkxewmv/logo%20idea.png?dl=0

Hi Sir! Thanks for the feedback and ranking. Will submit the changes sooner.

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Hey, thanks for the logo submissions. Here are some specific suggestions to improve the design(s).
Color Scheme:
Idea 1: Black and Green to show a clean contrast
Idea 2: metallic grey/gun metal
Idea 3: A combination of black, green, metallic

Graphic: Could you incorporate the football graphic from this logo? We own the logo rights so you may cut and past the football or render your own version. designhttps://www.dropbox.com/s/4stao2utl3s3a84/tip_of_the_spear_logo.png?dl=0

Pillar + Bridge Idea: I like how you worked it into your most recent entry, but wanted to see if you could adjust it so there are two distinct pillars holding up an arch bridge. This can be subtle or obvious or if it doesn't work with the design concept then we don't need to include it, but if there is a way it would be the best of both worlds. Thank you, please let me know if you have questions. Im looking forward to seeing the next design!

Hi Sir! I have update some new revision! Hope you like it. Your feedback will help me to serve you my best.

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Hi Sir! Thanks for the feedback, Will submit the revision sooner.

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Thanks for submitting. I think it's too basic and original. could you work on the font, shapes, etc to make it more dynamic and attractive ? Thanks

Hi Sir! My take on your logo! Hope you like it, Your feedback will help me to serve you my best.

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