Hello Waveman777 Thank-you for your designs. Like the font and interesting colourway used in number 8. However the designs need to work harder to convey our proposition. At the moment the horse is there but not the role it plays for our clients. Your clear designs though do strike a good balance in providing both a warm and professional feel. Look forward to seeing more. Best wishes
I'm not quite sure what kind of elements might emphasise best what you do, so I'm trying to incorporate some of them that I think might work: #22, #23, #24. Please let me know your thoughts.
Hello probably the support aspect of our charity is best conveyed by the 23 - but still not quite there. Not sure what stars are adding and perhaps a more stylised horse. Hope this helps Also type could be balance better to avoid longer second line. Hope this helps
Hi Waveman, We like the text and colours of #45 please can we see the horse without stars and perhaps changed to appeal to a coprorate market rather than a horse lover.