Thanks for waiting. I'm sorry it's taken a bit to get back to you - I had to walk away to clarify my thoughts. I really like the overall look that you've created here. I'm having a hard time explaining, but it doesn't exactly feel like my business - it reminds me of people - like a non profit that helps people or kids or something. It's really powerful, though. I definitely like it a lot.
My thoughts on how to improve it for my business would be: 1. Possibly elongate the ends of the 2 spirals so that they don't look so much like people 2. Change the font so that it is less block-ey
You are a fantastic designer and this is a beautiful piece, it's just not symbolizing my business as well as I think it could. Maybe you have some ideas...
Also, as far as colors, I have narrowed it down to: Black - Bold, sophisticated, spiritual, mysterious, elegant Purple - fantasy, mystery, spirituality, sophistication, expensive, feminine Silver - Vision, Clarity, strength, feminine Green - Growth, renewal, healing, life Orange - vibrant, playful, uninhibited, artistic Brown - Depth, Richness, Subtlety, Earth, Nature
I only want to see one or two in any given design, but these are the ones that I'm most interested in having symbolize the company.
I liked the colors in your earlier work better for the design that you've created. If I were to change them, I might go with silver instead of gold and possibly a greener green. The purple and gold are really nice, too.