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The original text alignment where the lower case e and upper case E where inline it does look odd and not well balanced. I've shifted the "tire Service to the right a wee bit for 2 reasons
1. breaks the end vertical alignment which looked odd to me in the original version.
2. increased the spacing between S&R Mobile and TIRE SERVICE
3. Changed the tagline font it look so much better and easier to read
The original text alignment where the lower case e and upper case E where inline it does look odd and not well balanced. I've shifted the "tire Service to the right a wee bit for 2 reasons
1. breaks the end vertical alignment which looked odd to me in the original version.
2. increased the spacing between S&R Mobile and TIRE SERVICE
The minor update also balances the bottom part of the tagline.
Had some advice from my sister that the tag line made the logo to busy. To see what it the logos I liked looked like with out it. I am still on the fence about with or without.
Thank you for considering my work, what do you mean by stronger colors? Side note stronger colors has no meaning to a designer. Maybe an example would help.
Are you referring to over used eye candy effects such as gradients and lens flares?
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The original text alignment where the lower case e and upper case E where inline it does look odd and not well balanced. I've shifted the "tire Service to the right a wee bit for 2 reasons
1. breaks the end vertical alignment which looked odd to me in the original version.
2. increased the spacing between S&R Mobile and TIRE SERVICE
3. Changed the tagline font it look so much better and easier to read
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The original text alignment where the lower case e and upper case E where inline it does look odd and not well balanced. I've shifted the "tire Service to the right a wee bit for 2 reasons
1. breaks the end vertical alignment which looked odd to me in the original version.
2. increased the spacing between S&R Mobile and TIRE SERVICE
The minor update also balances the bottom part of the tagline.
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having said the the tag rocks! on the tire.
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Are you referring to over used eye candy effects such as gradients and lens flares?
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