S.O.D.Logo Design Contest

Thank you to have replaced the stars by ONGD, good. But something is off with the ladies. Can't really exactly describing but the general feeling out of the logo is not exactly in line with the image we want to project

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Hello, yes definitely more in line with what we are looking for. But still on the women side could they look more "roots" and could it be possible to somehow represent them doing an activity (all the idea it is to show that we are working with women, empowering them economically and socially through education or work)
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Thank you for the improvement, really it is appreciated. So instead of stars it will be nice to have "ONGD" (which in English means NGO focused on Development). Color wise, we need more brighter ones (a sunshine yellow, a red like blood, etc), ladies should look more"roots". Hope those indications help

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Thank you for the prompt update. The girls are black so it will be nice if hairs are more like afro. Bests

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Good morning, we like the general proposal. Thank you. Few points however, we would have preferred the figures to be identified as women, the colors to be brighter and Sud-Ouest Développement to be fully written (it is not essential for us to have the motto in the logo)
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