You are on the right track but I still feel like the logo is more retro and less vintage/1920's eclectic than I would like. When I say "vintage," I'm really interested in creating something rustic (something that reflects how the bakery will have exposed brick and weathered wooden tables), and not something that looks like a 1950's retro diner. I hope this makes sense!
Also, is it possible to make all of the lettering lower case, including the letters at the beginning of each word?