Feel like it is too young, and I want it to be hipper and edgier. I feel like the red background could almost be like feeling like the graffiti wall, so the Rys Playland should feel like it is graffitied on the wall. I think the ferris wheel should be stylized more like graffiti as well. I would also like to see the red as orange instead.
Would love to see entry 14 worked on a bit. Would like the font to be more like a dripping paint graffitti, and the ferris wheel as well. The font on Ry's playland should look more like graffitt> For color, I prefer the darker orange and blue of entry 12