Keeps getting better! Love the thicker lines and "g" in geeks breaking the lower line. Two thoughts.... can the angle of the "geeks" text be increased to match the right-hand angle of the "V"? We like the fact that the "g" slightly overlaps the "V" and would like to keep that. What can we do to decrease the white space above "geeks"? Maybe make the lettering a little taller, bringing it closer to, or even connecting to the motorhome graphic in some way?
Very nice font and nice size lettering! If you can enlarge the RV as shown in the markup, that would be great. One other thing... please change the color of the "geeks" to the following yellow: #F6E453 and surround the lettering with a stroke or some other effect to ensure the paler yellow color stands clearly off of the white background. THANKS!
Couple of things we like: the RV is nicely tied in to the text; and we like the two-color "RVgeeks". We have some concern that the yellow would be lost on a white background (maybe needs a stroke?). We'd suggest with this design that the "Helping RVers Go DIY" tagline be eliminated. Possibly use a more interesting italic font to show some motion? Can the RV be made larger/longer to be more prominent in the design, possibly extending further out to the right... and make the "RV" text taller to match the height of the larger RV graphic? We also like the negative space in the "R" being used as a mouse! But the yellow scroll-wheel seems a little lost and could disappear at small sizes. Any way to make that more prominent? Thanks!
We like this the best of the ones you submitted. Could we use a white background for design purposes? The RV seems a little hidden, and the slogan text is a little small. Maybe try a different font?
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