It works okay, I like the font used for "ruthless" but with the word Pencil offset to the left the script font is a wee bit to weak for this layout. It works fine with the other layouts. I'll try strengthening or change the font
Great idea to use a tag line so the "i" has the pencil tip... Let's try the tag line: "writing/on design/by design" I also still like #25, #27, and #28. Maybe pick your favorite of those three and add the tag line? Thanks!
I can't decide between the fonts of #93 and #94; #93 is more my personality (girly and fun), but I teach at the Fashion Institute of Technology, so my students write with draftsmen letters, more like #94....so, I'm still deciding.
Let's use a different tag line for #93 and #94: "Find your story. Tell your story." Use your design judgment to decide whether to capitalize "Find" and "Tell."
I can envisions your students animating this design and have the sharpener grinding down the pencil...it could be used for website or Power Point presentation intro etc.
I don't mind the font for the tag line, "find your story...tell your story" but is there something with a little more zip? You may have picked the plain font so it didn't compete with the rest of the design, and that's ok. Thanks.
Thanks for the refinement...I like #126 a lot, and I still like #107. I love your idea of having my FIT students animate the pencil sharpener for a Powerpoint presentation -- great idea! I am going to pick a winner tomorrow. Thanks again.