Hello! I appreciate your entry on my very special project in launching a dream I have had for years ... outfitting my friends, colleagues, and clients ~ ' on air talent ' .... perhaps if you could rethink in a more sophisticated manner without so much emphasis on the graphics. I don't want it to look like a dry cleaners with the hangers. More emphasis on the sophisticated style, elegance, attitude, chic couture ... perhaps another shoe, think Devil Wears Prada, a Christian Loubitan black pump with the red sole ~ sophisticated style could be enhanced ... You are on the right track .... again, THANK YOU SO MUCH!!! I look forward to seeing your revisions from more of a chic couture space ... Have a beautiful day! Style Ally
Hi! I love your designs! I am sitting with a producer in the entertainment industry and her eye went right to your designs! Can you please change the shoes to a cleaner, slicker, elegant black pump ( Christian Louboutin ) with red sole, Please put the slogan all on one line. Can you scroll or put a red line under sophisticated style, and put in red ... please try Runway in silver foil and boardroom in red. Does that make sense? THANK YOU THANK YOU!!!
Hey there, thanks for the feedback. Sure I can change the shoe and fonts :o) I'll have a play around. Oh and I'll try make it more serious/sophisticated looking. Regards
Okay ... we are very close! Love the shoes! Perfect!!!! The color of the grey is too light though. Love the clean lines and the readability of these two! The font on the slogan should all be the same font emphasizing the sophisticated style in red and a swoosh underline. Capitalize the Bringing S, S, Sit with the Chiefs. Perhaps put Style Ally like as if I were saying Bringing Sophisticated Style ... blah and the Style Ally was my signature like an autograph underneath it at the end.
#7: please change the shoes to the new shoes. Boardroom in black. Perhaps use another font. It looks too generic.
The other two (2) I do really like the cleanliness of them just the fonts are doing it for me ... but, the layout, the shoes, the vision you have ... I LOVE!
My daughter loves #7! It is my lucky number .... and, lastly, think about the layout ... perhaps the slogan needs to be one line and remember, i will need to put all my other information, contact, web, twitter, instagram, facebook etc.
Thank you so much! Ally
THANK YOU SO MUCH!!!!!! Can't wait to see revisions!
Okay ... sweet! I love the way you accented ' success ' instead! YES! Can you please put Runway in red and Boardroom in black. Please change the font for Style Ally to either the same cursive ' stepford wives ', feminine font ~ so there are not so many different fonts. I LOVE THE CLEANLINESS of this!
Let's do 2 versions of the slogan only and the rest the same: 1. with ' sit with the chiefs ' slogan 2. with ' bringing you sophisticated style for success 3. all w/ runway in red, boardroom in black 4. style all in the same font as Runway 5. underline ' success ' in red 6. is it possible to angle the shoe on the right when you are looking at the pair to just show slightly angeled 7. please show me both versions of the slogan with and without Style Ally. Maybe I don't need that. BTW ~ my name is Allison ' Ally ' which is the double ontandra of ' Style Ally ' / ' Style Alley ' . What do you think?
#71 ~ did you receive my comments above ... here they are again ... THANK YOU THANK YOU !!!!
Let's do 2 versions of the slogan only and the rest the same: 1. with ' sit with the chiefs ' slogan 2. with ' bringing you sophisticated style for success 3. all w/ runway in red, boardroom in black 4. style all in the same font as Runway 5. underline ' success ' in red 6. is it possible to angle the shoe on the right when you are looking at the pair to just show slightly angeled 7. please show me both versions of the slogan with and without Style Ally. Maybe I don't need that. BTW ~ my name is Allison ' Ally ' which is the double ontandra of ' Style Ally ' / ' Style Alley ' . What do you think?
Gotcha thanks. Also, on #72, the writing all on one line is going to be very tiny. The space horizontally is much narrower. With it all on one line it's at 6pt. Which is very small. Standard text in a book is usually around 10pt to give you an idea of size. The 'style Ally' font is the same in both #71 and #72. #72 is just smaller, it might make it appear different on screen. I think the 'Style Ally' double ontandra is clever but I didn't understand it until you said your name was Allison. I think if people know you by this name it will make sense to them. I made the left shoe slightly smaller to show a bit of dimension. Angling the right one will probably work too, good idea! I'll resubmit the changed entries in a sec. :o)
73 ... just angle the shoe the opposite way slightly. AND, make sophisticated style black as an option on the same design WITH the shoes perfect. These are great! And ... just mazimize the space as you said to balance the text out so that it is readiable ... What do you think .. am i missing anything on this? LOVE THEM!
* slant the right shoe the opposite way * sophisticated style in black * please add two little couture lines on each side of Style Ally * also make Boardroom a solid font
Hello Fabulous Designer! I am so excited and trying to decide the final logo ... would you mind please making these final revisions as they are of paramount in my selection ... as you know, like you ~ I am very visual! Your time is appreciated immensely! Truly! This is my 1st choice is just isn't moved yet due to the final revisions ... With respect!
Hey Ally, sorry about the late reply, bit hard with the time difference. I'm ok to make the following changes but you will have to change the ranking to my design first for me to be able to submit the changes. Because the contest is in judging mode only the no.1 designer can submit. You can always change the ranking back afterwards if you like the other design better. Regards!