Hi there fabulous ' on the mark ' designer ....is it possible to refine #2 & #4 a bit? No stars (2) it is pretty much perfect. I really love it. Simple. #4 ~ no stars ... what are the chances you could incorporate a ' Christian Loubitan red pump or black pump with the red bottom? Thought is ' walking in the shoe could be anyone '... what door will you open today, which pair of shoes will lead you to closing that deal '? #3 i like but just a little too busy. I love #2 sopisticated style in red.
Still LOVE this one for the cleanliness of what it stands for. Will you be providing me the pms colors etc. if selected? What do you think about incorporating a black pump with the red sole like Christian Louboutin? My fav? Almost there!!! SO VERY MANY THANKS! My other company, Out of the Box Promotional Marketing, has an exclamation point in the logo so I was wondering what you thought about any synergies? Thank you!!!!
Okay ~ I really like entry 31. I love the r2b and space it takes up on the card. Perhaps, use a more high end ladies pump image like CL ( Christian Louboutin ) black pump with the red sole and place it really close to the ' b ' ... The shoe image used looks clip art and like Dorthy and I want to click my heals :) ... and the font at the top I am not crazy about and perhaps the number 2 could be used differently ... I really like this one!
on 29 ... let's use the same ' new ' pump and I like the way you blocked the number and the shoe. What about if you bring the heel of the ' new ' pump down to the end of the ' slogan ' and make the heel part of an exclamation point? Would Style Ally fit on the ball of the shoe perhaps this icon could be something I could incorporate into more things and places ... great work! Thank you!
okay ... even though this is great ... how can we make it more readable? less taking up space? love the bold contrast .. but, my producer friend thinks you can not read the logo very well? please keep thinking in your creative manner ... love your process!!!! this is very in line .... love it!
WOW ~ Here we go: # 39 ~ This is really one of my top designs. It is powerful ~ but, needs something .... RUNWAY 2 BOARDROOM needs to be more prominent and stated since that is the name of the company. Can you reverse that line to the top and enlarge the name ... perhaps shrink the blocking of the r2b and, btw, could you add RW2BR ( ?) thoughts? ... on the heel, please make the tip of the heel black, no red at the tip, the circle in the exclamation point is the only red. Put Style Ally in the red circle (?) thoughts?, perhaps the shoe could be on the end? But, the name needs to be on top ... I keep looking at this ... I totally get the blocking and space ~ but, just see what you can do ... I really love this one!
# 2 & 15: Capitalize the word ' Chiefs ' and ' Bringing ' and all the other power words, please. Please make the hanger solid without the split line. Can't decide if I like the stars or not so leave them for now just make them both the same only one will have the stars.
#40: Please make the same ' shoe ' changes with the point and color of bottom of heel. Style Ally needs to be a little more apparent and readable .... as you can see, your designs are in my top 5 .... we are close ... perhaps the heel of the shoe should be the point of Chiefs and the shoe come down the side?
Please make Runway ' red '.
#3: can you please split style ally ~ half on the black and red. i really like the creative ... emphasis the sophisticated style in red please.
#4: my son loves! please add style ally and just refine a bit ...
Hi there ... wishing you a grand day! Would you be able to let me know when you are able to make the afore mentioned creative changes? We are so eager to see the revisions to make our final selections ... We thank you so very much for all your creative input! Warmly, Style Ally
Just a couple refinements #65: 1. Please put Runway in Red. 2. Please make the line thinner. 3. Is there a way to make the square not so heavy in color - perhaps more elegant. I LOVE, don't get me wrong ~ as you can, I LOVE this ~ but, is there a way to make it more elegant, Chanel, Prada, just not so heavy with all filler to shadow the letters. Does that make sense? My eye is drawn to this design ~ we just need to make it a bit lighter in feel with the ' blocking ' ....
#67: 1. Is there a way to make the 2 more prominent. Like swinging down and across and under the shoe? There is something here that I love ... I like the 2 and shoe .. just rethink this icon ... we are close!!!!! 2. ' Bringing ' NOT ' BRINGING '. 3. underline ' success ' NOT sophisticated style ' ... LOVE that change!
BTW ~ My name is Allison thus, Style Ally meaning ' Style Alley ' ... :)
#69: LOVE it ... can you put Style Ally in the circle / dot of the heel. Reverse out the line where Bringing .... blah can be readable inside the stripe ... but, don't make it too heavy ... I am panicking almost there ... Style Ally
Hi! It Style Ally ~ My ' dream team ' has told me I need to look at entry #80! Can you please change the font on both Runway and Boardroom? Runway should be fun and Boardroom ~ corporate in black.
Also, we need to figure out how to make the 2 more readable? If you didn't know it right away ~ you wouldn't know it was a 2 ... it is too difficult to see ... WE LOVE THE SHOE and the exclamation point feel ~ very similar to my other business logo ' Out of the Box Promotional Marketing ' .... what can you do from your creative eye to make the 2 more a 2 and part of the blocking space with the shoe.
Maybe if the shoe sits more on the line that goes across and the heel drops down and the heel and the point is the exclamation point after success. They the 2 would be seen ....
THINK FASHION, VOGUE, CHANEL, PRADA again .... There is something here and my dream team loves this one ..... this is going to be difficult ... thank you for your time!!!! Seriously!!!! I may choose two!
beautiful! #98 ~ please remove the exclamation point after success and make the circle red under the heel. maybe not so big on the circle ~ angel the word style ally slightly as if i were to have written it and make it a little bit more bold. 2nd option on this same concept ~ remove style ally from inside the circle and place underneath the circle underneath the success, underline the word success in black, and write style ally underneath success like i wrote it. :)
on this one I just don't want it to look like neiman marcus they have a black circle .. so it could be smaller ... love 98!
100 ~ love the fonts on all! love the line forming the 2, but the shoe and the circle under the point are competing with the exclamation point ... should the shoe be sitting on top of the 2? There is something here we are almost there .... perhaps the shoe sitting down more on the line and not circle for the point ... although that is association to my other logo which i love , for out of the box promotional marketing .... check that out ... but, just see how you can make 100 the blocking of the 2 and the shoe more perfect and easy and professional ...