If I may I'd like to suggest a couple of things. Not saying it will look better but it might. Move the Run4KenyanKids from the top off the 3 figures and relocate it in large black writing of the same size (except for capital letters) where the Equator Training Camp, Nyahururu, Kenya is currently located. Then put Equator Traning Camp, Nyahururu, Kenya below Run4KenyanKids in smaller print. Rather than separate the words with a comma try it with a dot in the middle between the words Camp and Nyahururu and Kenya. The girl looks great.
Hello, As you can see, I am inspired a lot by African art and it seems that you do like my entries. I was wondering, if there is anything I can do to improve them?
I like your work but favor bussinessbuilders entry mainly because it will have a more practical use as a logo. i would to like to see them use your run4kenyankids font on their logo to see if it's an improvement. if you allow this this i would be happy to buy your entry outside the competition for $200 usd. i think they have conveyed this to you.