RSK Capital PartnersLogo Design Contest

it's Capital Partners, with an 's' at the end

sorry for this mistake

no problem - can you make the mountain so that it's sloping upward at the end? it's for an investment firm, so it should look like a rising stock market, not a crashing one.

or another way might be to swap the 2nd and 3rd peaks in the mountain range

I like your mountain design, but it's not right yet. please make the third peak slightly higher than the second peak, and make the dip before it less severe. it should not go down that far. just a nice, gently upward sloping mountain range. what you are doing with the first 2 is perfect - just add a third.

did you see my last message?

thanks for the feedback
I will do the revision now

#151 #152
if there is still a mistake, in my understanding of your feedback
please do not hesitate to tell me soon

I like #152 and #154, but you misunderstood me.
The mountain represents the stock market. As such, the end of the 3rd mountain peak cannot slope lower than the prior peaks, because then it looks like a declining stocks market, which of course is not good for an investment firm. however, I like the arc that you made, so if you can change the shape of the mountain and still keep the arc or something similar, that would be great.

also, you did it right in a previous version - #136. however, it looked odd b/c the dip after the second peak was too big and the 3rd peak was too big.

finally, I def like #89 - but please take out the shaded line in the background that looks like a 1/2 moon.

#155 with no shaded line

#156 #157 #158
I hope I doing it right this time

I am leaning toward #158. however, couple of changes:
1) these look like volcanos, not mountains - can you make the peaks more like mountains? but not too pointy - relatively flat or rounded on top
2) please lessen the back slope on the 2nd and 3rd mountains. the little line that starts between the R & S, and the S & K. The line that starts the base of the mountain starts a little too early and is a little too long.

forgive me if I find it difficult to interpret back, in the Bahasa

#161 #162

thanks for the changes, but the rounded tops don't look right. #158 looks much more polished.
however, I like what the lessened "backslope" on #161. can you use that element on #158?
we are def close.

I hope this is what you mean #163

no - that's not quite right. just go with #158, but look at the line that starts peaks 2 and 3. just start the line with less "upslope". the line that starts the peaks is too low at the beginning of the slope.

#164 I have made a red line ,....is this what you mean with "but look at the line that starts peaks 2 and 3"

is this what you mean
make the red line, to be like this #165

I like #166, but now the "snow" on the 3rd peak goes too low.
there is a lot of variance from design to design.

This #167 might be able to fix mistakes #166

sorry #168

did I make a mistake, forgiveness if so

thank's