Hi Roz,
designs have been corrected in the line shape,
uhmm ... about the mock-up, for now I can not do it, because it would violate the rules that apply to all designers, that is not allowed a designer to give an appointment or additional services / support services, before he was selected as the winner of the contest. I'm sorry.
but in your contest, I have been considering that my design must meet the basic criteria that is, able to be applied in various media and size, also still look good to convey messages from a corporate identity purposes.
if anything you want to create, or explore in this concept, please let me know.
Thanks
TC
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