i like the simplicity of your design but must mention this will be printed on a white tag. Also i would like the logo to reprersent a more elegant feel. The swimwear and kaftans will be flowing and sexy with class and sophistication and the logo need to reflect this.
number #70 is the closest from your collection so far. i like the elegance in the writing, although it has no color i like its flow. I cant really make out that the "r" is an "r" though, maybe this could be changed?:)