It's hard to articulate how this can be improved because it's so good. I love the originality of the shape of Portland, and how it's subtle enough that you almost have to be a local to catch one. Maybe make the rose and the city shape different colors? The font is a little more "cursiv-ey" than I imagined on this one, and the word "resume is not as prominent as I want. I also like the bottom bars that also look like buildings, but I wonder if it's hard to tell what it is supposed to be to someone that doesn't know. I like a little mystique in a logo, but not too much. Overall, your art is amazing.
Wow, I'm amazed. The St. Jonh's Bridge is literally perfect, and the sketch makes it look like water underneath. At first I thought I liked an emphasis on "rose city" being larger, but I'd like "resumes" to be more prominent and thicker. Can you make the circle and roes more playful (no change to the St. Johns bridge which is great)? And maybe the top line main letters like "R" get a little more of a cursive, on the part of the serif's tail, bracket (or whatever the bottom of the letter is called)?
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