Thanks for submitting an entry. I like how RPP is front and center and has the writing with the full park name underneath. I also like the font style. I do not care for the detached or windswept look of the RPP. Would it be possible for you to create a logo or play around with the font so that the RPP depicts Camden city hall? Can you add some edgy or art deco elements maybe? Also play around with some of the colors and fullness? Not sure if possible, but I could send you some other images of the park concepts if that will help conceptualize the theme of the park.