Thanks for submitting an entry. I like how RPP is front and center and has the small writing with the full park name underneath. I also like the font style. I do not care for the raindrops/trees. Can you play around with the logo image please? Maybe one of Camden City hall or another iconic emblem of the park? Can you add some edgy or art deco elements maybe? Also play around with some of the colors, please. Not sure if possible, but would love to send you some other images of the park concepts.
Thanks