Ahh I see. Yes I prefer the clean line. The crayon art of the text takes care of that. As it exists now it is square which is great. As an experiment can we try one that is more horizontal still comprised of all of the same art components/elements? It will need to fit here at the upper left :
1) No frisbee in the dogs mouth. 2) The dog is great but if he were turner more sideways the other direction with his ears extended more like he is leaping and the happiest guy on the planet! Really give the dog character that is EVERYTHING. 3) 1 or two more green rolling hills in the background. They could be a solid color more pronounced. The sun is great we would still like to incorporate that in the design.
If we can see a version of that we would be really close.
Yes. The ears should be more up and pronounced. Like the wind is blowing them up and back.
Also the rolling hills need to be solid color and more pronounced with a larger sun and beams off of the sun. Two rolling hills.
Lastly, the dog seems like it's just leaping from a stand still straight up into the air. She wants it in a more forward and sideways position like it's running fast then jumped.
Everything needs to POP! and burst with color...good job so far!
Thanks for your hard work. Still in the running...