The shape and mountain/river design is excellent in entry #2. I like the way that the symbol merges well with the lettering below. I appreciate that there is more than 1 element of nature combined (i.e. river and mountians). I wonder if another colour (in addition to blue and green) may increase its appeal.
Hello again. Thanks for the variations. I have two requests for entry #2 1. Could we try adding a sun to see what it looks like? 2. Is there a way to centre "english college" and make it slightly larger or does the tail of the "y" get in the way? (I do like the font in #2 and am wondering if "english colllege can be larger and centred without changing it) Thanks Tridoso......beautiful work!
Hello Tridoso Thanks for your further input. Could you please take the lettering from #125 and place it below the symbol of #90? Also, could you slightly increase the size of "english college"?
Hello Mr. CH Thanks for your feedback above. But please note that in the Judging mode Only the 1st ranked designer will be able to submit entries. So if you want to see your improvement as your suggestion above please make me rangk #1 as temporary.
I have moved you to rank #1. Could you please combine the symbol from #90 with the lettering from #127 (or #125)? We can see what this looks like and go ahead from there.