Could you help me? I would really like to see some changes. Thanks! This has potential but the college girls I talked to and the guys say it looks like smiling boobs! If we make the rocker a little smaller and get rid of the hooks on the TJ maybe make the J bottom more like a dress then the TJ would look like a line drawing of a bride and groom dancing.
Hello Thank so much you for the new variation. I just read the FAQ's and it says that I should have you make all the revisions I need before the end of the contest. Trouble is..... your in Turkey and the time zone is different...... I just hope you can be available for awhile longer.
Anyway here goes. Entry 141 has the current vote but I am still struggling with the flow of the train on the dress. If it was a "J" then the flow would be to our left rather than to the right. That said maybe just a more artistic flow the way it is, not so heavy?? Can you give me some more variations BOTH ways?
I like the rocker under the "couple TJ" the direction of entry #138
I did like the way that "T" sort of lifted the "J" in Entry 106 could you add that variation to one of the #`141?
I would love to see other colors but also a more gold foil faded gold??? Can that be? I do like it bold. One of your wine contest logos has a more foil and red. Can we play with the TJ in the text with color?
Also try putting a small rocker under the TJ text as well.
I also like the text in Ketut's with the line under the Rockin' TJ Ranch can we try that? And the little line under the slogan in Entry #24. The small rocker under the text TJ could cross the line a little.
OKAY!! I really hope I am not asking to much! This is just sooooo HARD! the second and third entries are so great!! Ketut's diamond in pink is gorgeous!! But I am not a jewelry store and it does not show "events". The Third ranked is so artistic but very feminine and I have other events and men too. SO...Yours shows both men and women It makes the women shine as do bride's simple bold and fun!
I tried a new combination, #166 and others. Dress flows to left ; more clear J T lifted J ; and T is more clear (a heart between them ) Color and text variations.
Thank you so much for your patience and your hard work!!!
I am truly struggling with a top ONE pick. I would like both of the top two entries and have sent a request to the powers that be for how and if I can do that.
In the mean time if I am only able to take one then I wonder if you can help make just some minor changes to entries. My friends all like this design best as it is FUN!
First I need to delete the slogan and just put in the title of my biz for all entry changes: "Montana Weddings and Special Events"
Entry141: 1 Could you please make the dress's train a little more of an elegant flow? Maybe it is the sharp points up it the flow of the train that Is not quite right? 2 Please add the rocker under the TJ in all entry changes 3 Would you try to keep the couple just as is in height but flow her dress to the left to look more like a J? Just think of what the material would do it if swirls to follow the dancer as she moves to her right?
Entry 166 1 The new dress to the left in entry 166 looks too fan and unnatural But it does symbol the J better. Again think of what the material would do it if swirls to follow the dancers to her right?
2 Maybe could you bring the J dancer lady down just a bit in height it may help the dress. Do you know what a train on a wedding dress looks like? My guess is that you do! Much more like 166
Entry 176 3 J lady to high and body too short Could you lengthen her?
I believe I will be right to the end before I can make up my mind! I am so pleased with the contest and the talent of the designer! Some very unique and different designs!
#187 - #188 : modified logo I think this is closer to your needs, am I right ? We can modify this logo as your request, ( or we can go with a new direction )
Thanks, that is a much better flow for the dress train for entry 189 but can we try s slim sleek dress instead of showing a waist? Also try the train back to the right and the guy back to straighter Entry 141.
Thanks, I' m glad you like it. Hope your friends will like it too. I think TJ combination shows "wedding-events" clearly for both male and female. And I'm sure you know what you want ( changes with your direction shows that , and I also liked the final logo) I'm waiting for results.