I'd like to minimize my suggestion of the color Sunburst/Golden Rod. This should be used as an accent color only, not as the principle color. My fault!
I'd also like to have a bigger, bolder use of Be A RockStar! This is my main message and needs to come center stage.
The idea probably has too much "music" associated with it. Yes, I'm a musician who speaks, but the message is about how YOU can be a RockStar in your professional life. It's not about limos, leather pant, or hit songs. It's about being the Best Of You!
Hopefully this might give you a new idea or sense of direction. You can look at my website at www.RobinCreasman.com and see my current logo (name only) which I like. But it doesn't have any "logo" or use of Be A RockStar in it. If you can incorporate a new idea that would be great.
Thank you for the new submission. It's getting much closer. One thing I'd like you to address is that I feel it's a little too masculine and it needs to be a little softer. Remember, my target audience is female 30 - 55 years old. It feels a little to "hard" and has sorta of a "motorcycle" feel too it. I personally like it, but it probably needs to have a softer feel in the Font and the way Be A RockStar is presented.
One of my associates thinks this logo is more on track for what we're trying to do. I'm still wanting something a little more fun & festive. Think about this being used on a T-Shirt that women (35 year old girls) would want to wear.
Hi, thanks for the feedback - it certainly helps the process along .... I had missed the target audience part somehow ... here is another go, I'll keep thinking too,
Another quick thought as I look at the logo, it almost feels like a Tatoo and that's not what I want. Can you adapt it a bit and maybe add in some "yellow or goldenrod" color in the background maybe. And tweak it where it doesn't have the tatoo feel. And finally maybe choose a different font presentation for my name?
#40 is definitely closer to the target audience, but I think it can be a little more bold in color and more fun. I like it better than #29 for sure, so see if you can add a little more "sizzle."